In the “General  Audience Essay” I found that I has improved on my ability to connect the science to more general terms but every now and then I still struggle with syntax. Something that I did well in this assignment is that I simplified the language of scientific article to make it more understandable. Something I failed to do is set a specific tone throughout my article. It jumped from inquisitive to informative all over the place. I think however I did follow one of the learning outcomes specifically the “ formulation and articulation of a stance through my presentation and in my writing.” In my presentation I felt like I made alid understandable points but I also rushed through.